I am more than just a hot ride on a Friday night
The sweet fuck of your Saturday plans
And a prayer for more head on a Sunday morning
I am more than the incessant phone calls after I've ignored your first ten
Don't worry about me now because when you were my prey there was no interest then
I am more than a vegetarian meal
This girl is to be eaten not just fed
Lol, I mean, I'm not all conversation either
I am more than just the yo-yo in your pocket
A boomerang in your backpack
And a frisbee for your damn dog
You want to know who am I?
You don't deserve that kind of time
And neither do I
Deep Stuff.. You're In Your "Optimus Prime", More Than Meets The Eye Anandi.. Still Learning. xXx l|l
ReplyDeleteThinking about changing the ending. Replace "You don't deserve that kind of time..." with:
ReplyDeleteThere's this beautiful place called Outside
Where there are parks, museums, plays and movies
A place where people can relax and chill with other people
Talk whatever, do whatever, feel whatever
A place within many places where likes and dislikes are learned
Good habits are shown and bad habits are to become endearing or dismantled
Because I am sure I am not the only one of us who is just "more than"
I am sure that there is more to you than you lead on
More of you that you have never explored
And if you have, why not explore it with me?
Unless you are mistaken to believe that this Queen is less than
And deserves less than
Because I think together we can be more than just the average
Mental trap of sexing meaning loving
Fucking meaning being interested in;
It's more than an understatement that sharing this temple with you
Is less than what we let on
It is the goal; it is the nectar;
it is the ultimate of intimacies that we can share
Spine-Tingling Words.. That Sounds Like It Should Be A Part II..
ReplyDelete*smiling from ear to ear* thanks Fred
ReplyDeleteAny Time, And Don't Worry, The Song For The Ladies Is Coming VERY Soon. I Didn't Forget About You!
ReplyDeleteAnd "ReGenesis" Will Be Released Before The Year Is Up. Very Personal And Some Of My Deepest Thoughts Come To Surface Through The Mix Tape.
ReplyDeleteCan't wait to hear it Luv. Def keep me posted. I'll plaster you all over FB and other web sites
ReplyDeleteLike the initial post, but I absolutely LOVE the new ending! Very well written and thought out.
ReplyDelete"Refreshing and awesome!" - MR Times
"Thought-provoking!" - Ro Many
"Two thumbs-up!" - Me
... you get the picture.
This is truly amazing work, babe!
Lol. Thanks Fumz. I aim for all of the above
ReplyDeleteThough I think I said something wrong...."It's more than an understatement that sharing this temple with you is less than what we let on" ...should it be "...more than..." ???
ReplyDeleteShe's more than just a voice,
ReplyDeleteMore than just a smile,
More than just a face on Skype at the end of a day,
She's more than a friend,
She's more than just the physical,
More of an intellectual,
A free spirited being whose thoughts always captivate me,
She's more than a Queen,
Through my own fault,
She's disappointed in me,
I have become less than,
Less than what I set out to achieve,
Less than what she saw in me,
Less than a man,
You'd think that as a Mathematician,
I'd understand the difference between more than and less than,
More than should never be treated as less than,
For in this,
More than is GREATER than less than,
And must be treated as such,
She's more than any other,
If only she knew,
If only I knew how to express this,
We would,
Be more than...
Finally! Doing this from your phone is painstaking!
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